My Future:)
for my future I want something big I want to be a great communicator social I have a beautiful family with two children a boy and a girl :P I want to go to cnn I want to live in peace with my family I want my children are very very happy :)
use connectors that paragraph don't lose sense:)
ResponderEliminarMarga you should use more connectors , the ideas don't have order, the paragraph lost sense.
ResponderEliminarHi :)
ResponderEliminarI will having a beautiful family ;)